Editing Task: Learner Response

Class Responses:

WWW:

'Throw of sweet was much better, use of hoppy music because of food, faster editing made conversation feel more natural'

'Editing really good, the conversation shot well'

'Very entertaining, shots used well'

'Good use of editing techniques'

'Actress= pengers. You're ugly. It was better than mine. We're funny wow'

'Good editing, great narrative, good audio, gr8 m8'

'Funny, you demonstrated match on action and shot reverse shot'

'Funny video, slow motion had a good effect, shot reverse shot, music went well'

EBI:

'180 rule?'

'180 rule wasn't completely accurate'

'Need match on action'

Mr Halsey's response:

WWW:

Match on action

Shot reverse shot

180 rule

Really effective- genuinely funny, great comic timing and the editing feels smooth and continuous.

Match on action for the throw was timed very nicely... you clearly understand this and can execute it.

Shot reverse shot is there.

EBI:

You could have used match on action elsewhere.

Is there a moment where you glance at the camera?

There could have been more over the shoulder shots.