Ignite presentation LR

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each category. 
WWW: 'Love the title-and a great concept. Narrative development sounds good-the intertwining element is excellent and you've clearly planned it out. Good examples for mise-en-scene. Youtube premium is an interesting idea.

EBI: 'may be a challenge introducing 4 characters in the time of a trailer. Images may be better than text. Timing not quite right due to lack of rehearsal. Perhaps needed more research in terms of other coming of age drama films beyond Wallflower. Would distributors of low budget Brit dramas be more effective? Or even Netflix original? Structure jumps around a little'

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your narrative offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Does it fit the genre you are aiming for? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?

 I will update my statement of intent to explain the characters roles and how i will show them in the trailer with their storylines in order to allow the audience to clearly see the separate narratives. I will also update the mise en scene with more inspiration from other coming of age films. I believe it matches my target audience as the characters will reflect the targeted age group.

You also need to ensure that ALL your research and planning from over the summer - including your current statement of intent - is posted to your Media 2 coursework blog.

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Sound task feedback LR

Sounds Task: LR "Superb audience reaction-immediately gets a response which is a great sign. I'm not sure how contrapuntal the images/videos at the start are... perhaps because it is so well edited in time with the music? Because of this, there wasn't a dramatic shift between the two elements which I always look for with this task. Clear thought behind this in terms of audience effect + gratifications... this was made to entertain!" Class WWW: "Music goes entirely contrapuntal with the ballerina clip, while some of the clips are parallel to the 'Murder she wrote.'"song. "You changed the pace of the editing to match the music and used a mix of both images and videos. You made it very clear when it was contrapuntal/parallel sounds." "The comedic effect of the first half worked perfectly. The play of the words of the music "Murder She Wrote" and showing the image of the show and the other images made it solid. The seco
Read more

Introduction to Radio

BBC Sounds Read  this Guardian feature on the launch of BBC Sounds  and answer the following questions: 1) Why does the article suggest that ‘on the face of it, BBC Radio is in rude health’? Because it is evident that radio is becoming less popular with young audiences and there are already apps like Spotify that provide the music they want.'  It has half the national market, with dozens of stations reaching more than 34 million people a week. Radio 2 alone reaches 15 million listeners a week and for  all the criticism of the Today programme  (“editorially I think it’s in brilliant shape,” says Purnell), one in nine Britons still tune in to hear John Humphrys and his co-presenters harangue politicians every week. ' 2) What percentage of under-35s use the BBC iPlayer catch-up radio app? 3% 3) What is BBC Sounds? A public service app that provides podcasts, radio discussion, sports an music for young people. 4) How do audiences listen to radio content in the digital age? i
Read more

Deutschland 83: case study blog tasks

Image
Reviews and features Read the following reviews and features on  Deutschland 83 : The Guardian - Your next box set: Deutschland 83 Daily Telegraph review The Guardian - Deutschland 83 Pity the Germans don't like it 1) What positive aspects of  Deutschland 83  are highlighted in the reviews? The period drama included a  lot of 80's culture that was very well received by the British viewers. For exampl, the music was very nostalgic, the costumes and the props (the walkman). 2) What criticisms are made of the show? ' By focusing the story around Martin Rauch, a young East German border guard going undercover in the west, it doesn’t just make the viewer empathise with a Stasi agent on a human level – in the way The Lives of Others did – it makes us engage with the socialist regime’s worldview, in which a military exercise in West Germany poses a potentially   existential threat . Yet as if to make up for such a radical premise, it then backtracks into stereotype. Stasi offi
Read more